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    GHBsys - Web Banner [1.0]


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    I'm actually working @Photoshop and I need your feedback.

    (didn't created something for over >1 year< !!.

     

     

    Version1:

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    Version2:

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    Version3:

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    Version4:

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    Last Version:

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    Hey Hey Hey, Marlon wasch da losch ?!

    Hascht du gelernt? icon_biggrin.gif

     

    Really nice !

    Werde das später studieren mit meinem "FACHABITUR" :D

    danke <3 @all thanks

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    Smooth... good job mate :)

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    I like the red one. I think you should add some bold red to the letters though they are kind of shunned by the graphic.

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    I'm actually working @Photoshop and I need your feedback.

    (didn't created something for over >1 year< !!.

     

    I know how annoying it is to only get replies of people saying good job instead of giving suggestions. I'll hit you up.

    If you want this banner to fit for this template, there are a few things you need to take care.

     

    Here's why it wouldn't theoretically work in HTML/CSS

     

    Left brand (characters) - middle background pattern - right brand with various effects.

    logo + text in foreground

    Basically, you cant add a 1550px wide banner just like that. There are some rules you need to follow: logically, most of the screens have an average of one thousand pixels in width (only a few % use 1920x1080 resolutions) which means, your banner itself wouldn't entirely fit on their screen. Which is why this template relies on 3 different parts. The viable banner size is what this site currently uses. Good looking even on a mobile device (320px wide). Even then, we could manage to create responsive rules that would change the banner URL (image) to something else IF the screen exceeds "X" pixels in width, however your banner has some flaws.

     

    That's where the graphic part starts. On a strategic level, the banner image itself shouldn't have any border because the CSS of the template already covers the banner with borders. Plus, you're using a white background for some reason. You compressed the files as .png extensions (which is legit) but you kept it's white backgrounds while this template uses a dark theme. I'm sure there's an explanation to this because that's a rookie mistake. The layout itself, how elements are positioned in the image is decent(even though that's not how I would've approached it), & using shapes and forms like those you've used to put text inside isn't necessarily what a banner is for. The only way these shapes could've worked is if you had made them entirely black or white (no gradient overlay) and lessen the opacity. Version 2.0 with it's shape is too much. (I personally would've added the "2.0" next to the text or the logo. No need to specify it means "version".)

     

    That being said, even though what I just said is not graphic criticism (more like positioning), It'd be hard to throw at you suggestions or critics because honestly you haven't created that much (if we put the fact that you took my logo (which is by the way, not even finished)).

     

    Maybe work on your text effects. Colors, fonts, sizes and stuff. Theme of this website is blue-dark-ish. Some stroke, gradient overlay and dropped shadow on the text will make it look worse than just applying a color.

     

     

    I hope this project of yours isn't finished because it requires some changes.

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    Since sometimes you dont find anymore words then "awesome" and some members also

    are just amazed of the work but do not have so much knowledge in PS but still want to tell him

    how great it looks

     

    Also he isn't annoyed icon_wink.gif So why do you speak for him? Srsly.

    Are you for real? Jesus christ. I didn't say it was forbidden to say whatever you want. Honestly, here's what I think: as a graphic designer, it's often annoying to only have posts of people that don't necessarily know what they're talking about. I place myself as him when I say, I'd rather have someone tell me what he thinks about the image itself instead of clapping and positive repping.

     

    I mean, can't you read English properly? I seriously can't be arsed to explain every time what I type because you take everything literally instead of figuratively. Your reply itself just shows how off-topic you are right now.. And your reply is directed towards me. Don't come saying I'm disrespecting members when I take 15 minutes of my time to explain properly what I think are the flaws in his banner.

     

    Plus, I said, "I know how annoying it is" -- Did I hit him personally saying he's annoyed? I have not.

     

    Anyways, I still can't believe that my first sentence is the only thing you're replying about. I just can't. lmao wtf

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    It's ok mah girls, thanks for the "real" feedback :D

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    I've got no life.. hahahaah

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    Oh and yes my dear, I do understand proper english. Sometimes I just fail at grammer icon_wink.gif

     

     

     

    Haha the "oh and yes my dear" made me laugh...sorry to be off topic with the thread I just thought that was really funny.

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