Graphic FX Signature #1 or #2?

[Temp 21]

Had free time on my hands today and been able to create two (slightly) different versions of signatures for our beloved head mod.

First attempt:

Second attempt:

Your inputs are valuable.

Edited March 26, 2015 by Temp

[VentralieX 23]

I enjoy the first Signature very well, I love the borders and it has something special. I really love the dark pieces in this, and the font is better emphasized.

The second one is awesome too, but I'm definitely in love with the first one

[dyzer 0]

In my opinion the first one is looking better, but I would make it a bit smaller

[trapz0r 0]

The 2nd one cuz it has fine borders & the contrast is optimized ^_^

[Rikudou 27]

I like the 1st more then the 2nd cuz it's like from dark to bright and I think it looks more high definition.

[IWreckYou 20]

I like the first one because it's more bold.

 

I like bold.

 

I also think you should make me one!

[TheSyntaX 40]

I'd prefer #1 if you make the "border" a few px thinner.

[Fexious 3]

I would say the 2nd one because the brightness/contrast worked out very well, i honestly don't think that it is more beautiful to go from Dark to Bright, but everyone has their own opinions.
But at the other hand the 1st has better graphics, if you could make the 2nd a little bit darker it would come out perfectly.
Anyhow great job on both.

[MiickeyMouse 9]

i think that if you take the 1st one borders out it would be really cool but i voted for 2nd one because of that

[the.iceman 5]

i prefer 2nd one

BTW awesome job

[CloudAnarchy 1]

So ok the 2nd one is better for obvious reasons...Some stuff you could improve for sure:

1. Text is placed wrong but it kinda matches the signature congrats on that!

2. The background (which is the main problem) looks kinda messy and overall weird.

3. I like the effect on the render but you overused it.

4. Last but not least the highlight over the text looks out of place and its too random just remove it.

 

Good job thought keep trying!